Friday, January 22, 2010

persuasive


As I've mentioned before on my blog, for a portion of our school work we use literature based curricula. However this is our first year using a structured language arts program. The LA curriculum we use focuses largely on the child becoming a proficient and confident writer.
For a portion of our LA lessons this week, Havalah has been studying how to make a strong written persuasive argument. Not that this girl needs practice with this - at least not verbally. She can negotiate and persuade the heck out of us. Maybe it has something to do with those blond curls and blue eyes.
Today she wrote the first draft of a persuasive note to Jon and me. Pretty cute, I think. I like how she throws in the part of it being educational and also how she'll pay us back. The girl's a natural. Guess where we're gonna be going?
January 22, 2010
Dear Mom and Dad,
Please take me to both of the
zoos. I will pay you back, I
promise! It is adventurous,
it is fun, and we will get to learn.
Please take me there soon.
Yours truly.
Love, Havalah

4 comments:

Dawn said...

Very cute! Have a great time at the zoo(s). ;)

Miller Moments said...

so funny! I just read this to my whole family and we all chuckled. Havah reminds me a lot of Eli.

Anonymous said...

Take grandma with you!

Bloom Where You Are Planted said...

Oh!! This is awesome!!! :) I LOVE it!!